It’s nearly impossible to see the big picture when you’ve been neck-deep in your writing for weeks, months, or even years. You just want someone to tell you what WORKS.
The Manuscript Review is an in-depth assessment of your book. I'll read through your draft cover-to-cover and evaluate everything from narrative, structure, consistency, color—and anything else that needs attention. Then we'll meet to talk everything through so you walk away with clarity and action plan.
And don't worry — I won’t just point out what’s not working; I'll help you devise exactly how to fix it.
We're going to go big here to grab some attention.
MANUSCRIPT REVIEW
You’ve taken your manuscript as far as you can, and now you’re not sure what it needs. I’ll help you to see where you are and show you the best steps you can take to move forward.
GET CLARITY AND AN ACTION PLAN
The Manuscript Review is an in-depth assessment of your book. I'll read through your draft cover-to-cover and evaluate everything from narrative, structure, consistency, color—and anything else that needs attention. Then we'll meet to talk everything through so you walk away with clarity and action plan.
It’s nearly impossible to see the big picture when you’ve been neck-deep in your writing for weeks, months, or even years. You just want someone to tell you what WORKS.
AND DON'T WORRY — I WON’T JUST POINT OUT WHAT’S NOT WORKING; I'LL HELP YOU DEVISE EXACTLY HOW TO FIX IT.
If you're
looking for:
You’ve gotten a fair amount of writing done, and now, before you go any further, you’d love to check in with someone about what you have.
I can help
An honest opinion
You’ve lost momentum—or you’ve begun to feel overwhelmed by the project’s sprawl—and want guidance so you can stop spinning your wheels.
clarity on what to do next
You suspect your manuscript might be a mess and want help solving the big issues that could make or break your book.
HELP SPOTTING THE RED FLAGS
If you're looking for:
An honest opinion
You’ve gotten a fair amount of writing done, and now, before you go any further, you’d love to check in with someone about what you have.
Clarity on what to do next
You’ve lost momentum—or you’ve begun to feel overwhelmed by the project’s sprawl—and want guidance so you can stop spinning your wheels.
help spotting the red flags
You suspect your manuscript might be a mess and want help solving the big issues that could make or break your book.
great news...
Manuscript Review
We’ll meet to discuss your goals and where you’d most appreciate insight. After I read your pages, we'll connect for a 60-minute discussion session to clarify where you are and the next best steps you can take to move forward.
30-minute project kickoff call
60-minute discussion session
call recording and all materials
Email access for two weeks
TIMELINE: 5 DAYS | PRICE: $350
for returning clients
Strategy Sessions
You’ve already had a manuscript review. Now, you’d like to bounce some ideas, or have me review new pages. Or you’re stuck on one specific issue, or on a particular chapter. You can submit up to 20 consecutive pages (5000 words), and we'll meet for a 60-minute session to strategize a plan.
60-MINUTE STRATEGY Session
call recording and all materials
Email access for two weeks
TIMELINE: 5 DAYS | PRICE: $200
The Manuscript Review Process
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Here's what to expect:
The Manuscript Review Process
project kickoff
We’ll talk about your goals and ideas, and any specific areas where you want me to give extra attention.
deep dive
I’ll dig into every nook and cranny of your manuscript, noting the opportunities to improve your book and suggestions for how to do so.
discussion
You and I will then hash it all out in a 60-minute discussion session. And you’ll get a recording of our conversation—so no frantic note-taking required.
support
After our call, you’ll get two weeks of email support. Got followup questions? Ask away!
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“Working with Ann helped me overcome resistance and turn the misery into magic.”
If you want to get clear on the most pressing changes you can make for the biggest impact on your manuscript, Ann is the person you need to call.
Jonas Altman
Three Steps to Booked
Contact
The first thing to do is reach out to me by filling out the contact form and telling me a bit more about you and your book.
Connect
Next, we'll connect via email or Zoom, and talk about you, your manuscript, and whether I'm the right editor for the job.
Collaborate
Choose your start date, pay the initial deposit to lock it down, and send me everything you've got. Then it's off to the races.
Can I hire you to review my novel/sci-fi epic/lusty fan-fic/any other fictional work?
Sorry, but no. I specialize in nonfiction editing—which means your novel would be much better served by an editor who specializes in that space.
Still Have Questions?
What if I need to cancel or reschedule?
You can self-reschedule your discussion call up to 48 hours in advance; if you need to reschedule on shorter notice, you'll need to email me.
Manuscript Review and Strategy Session investments are nonrefundable, but can be rescheduled for up to six months.
How far in advance can I book you?
You can book your review or session up to four months in advance. If you're on a deadline, feel free to reach out through email for soonest availability.
Is editing included? Will you make changes to my manuscript?
Focused, high-level feedback is the name of the game here, and editing isn't included.
Do you offer a payment plan for these services?
All investments are broken down into two payments: a deposit, and a final payment.
The deposit is used to save your spot in my calendar, and the final payment is due on or before the morning of your project kick-off call.
“Ann is a master at getting you to see how much potential you have and how much better your work could be.”
It makes you feel great about making changes, like you're really excited to level up and make progress not just with your current project, but as a writer.
Justin Gosnell
So if you're ready for big-picture clarity and tailored guidance on what matters most...
Then the manuscript review is a great fit for you.
You’ll get expert eyes on your draft, and while I won’t focus on or fix every little issue, I will give you feedback that brings you closer to your goals and useful advice to improve the quality of your draft and your writing.
